very cool! transitions and story telling are spot on!

Loving the look of this, it reminds me of the early 2000s apocalyptic scifi. New yet nostalgic.

My only note is to just cut back on the dialogue a bit and tighten up the action scenes. Fighting scenes need a sense of fluidity and transition to it. Really use the weight of the scythe! You're very talented and I'm really excited to see what else you have in store. I could really see you doing something really pantomiming. <3